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WHOA!!! d>.<b

This is pretty sick! It actually almost belongs in the hardstyle section. Add more bass lines to make this sick, maybe some filler. I think you should def open this back up, because this has potential to own #1, esp in a dif category like I said, hardstyle, or maybe the general techno genre. This is sick, so great job bro!

SgtOreo

YES!!!!!!

AHH! I LOVE THIS ALREADY!!!!!! I CANT WAIT TO HEAR THE FINISHED THING!!!!!!!! This is that melody structure I have always wanted to hear in a song!!!!!

d^.^b

FIVE xD

once again, great remix bro :D

ZachPayne responds:

;D It's because of your sick tune!

ehhh, has its moments.

for one, TURN UP THE VOLUME!!!! xDxDxD

this is sick hardstyle, fear not! its not loud enough! shoot for a bit more complexity, completely dramatacize transitions. like, take the cutoff all the way down slowly as it comes to a kick point, then bring it back up in like 2 beats really fast and it makes for a sick transition. besides that kind of stuff, this is a sick song. of course, true hardstyle is in 6/8 (yeshhh!) great job bro!

instafav, add water!

FrameWork responds:

Yeh, looking back this is not brilliant! It was my first attempt so you know. Yeh, i need to work on my mastering, 'cause some bits are too loud, for instance, when the drum roll and stab fx are together, and so others bits are left too quiet! I'll try what you said! thanks for the review, glad you liked it!

-Framework-

wtf was this supposed to be?

sorry guy. I don't really hear what this might supposed to be or, idk. It's wierd. Give it a second workout, maybe somethin will pop out.

OneRealMusician responds:

you dont know what this is? yuou're retded/

Pretty up there! :D

The only reason I dare leave off that last star is because the introduction is very short, and since you have vocals that sound amazing btw, you should leech every bit of emotion from them. Maybe add a harmony or an extra line of verse, etc. Have the lead part be a little less suddle also. Overall, this is an amazing song! I definitely feel like I'm listening to some real song I found on like the "Top Techno 2011" video or somethin xD great job!
Oh yea, it's ridiculously short to have such amazing loops, so if you ever open this can back up, I'd shoot for some length.

Sgt. Oreo - APPROVE OVERWHELMINGLY

btw, check out my song Dancex just a few places under this

ioneofmany responds:

Thanks Sergeant Oreo for the review and support. I'll take your suggestions into consideration if this is reopened. :)

--Chris

GREAT START!!!!!! xD

I came from the bottom and had my bad starts, but this is a great start (as specified above lol). I think i will make my own version of this, because I love your melodies and loop progressions. It has the "starter" touch, but idc. This is great. I'm not downloading, sorry, but I look forward to hearing what you make in the future as you come up with new melodies and re-make your old songs.
Kudos, bro!

Pretty awesome!

Idk what Fall Lights are, but this is pretty great on itself. I don't have much time to write a full review, but the only thing that kept me from giving it a 5/5 is its lack of complexity.....don't misunderstand me, please. The melody is complex, but the use of VSTi effects is almost absent. And it helps sometimes mask some choppy leads. But I love this regardless. Keep it up!

IceMasterDlux responds:

Thanks man! Fall Lights is because I make a song for each season, and this is the Fall one. You should check out Winter, Spring and Summer Lights too! But thanks a lot for the great review, I appreciate it a lot! God bless man!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

Whoa

This is pretty great! It's down low and low-key. That's how I like my beats! You should check out mine. I saw some jerk low-balled ur song, but thas aight. i gave it a 4/5 and a 9/10, just cuz it kinda doesnt really go anywhere. its aight tho. when lyrics pop in, it changes alot.

Kudos!

dbace responds:

cheers man :D and i know, somebody does it to all my tracks :/

Pretty Sick

I saw my song was in the top in the hip-hop category, so I went to see what I was up against. Then I listened to this, and I realized why its number one, with a perfect score or 5. yea, one person (probably you, the author), but from now on, me too.
Bravo

InvasiveInsomniac responds:

Haha, thanks heaps man, I appreciate the good review. :) Glad you liked it..

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