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wtf

honestly, were rating THE MUSIC, not Madness Combat. This is worth like a 3, no where near a five. Are you guys just voting it a 5 because it's the official music for Madness Combat 10?!?!?! wtf! Whatevs man. Yea, its spastic, and not very enjoyable to listen to :/ sorry. i liked previous songs better

cheshyre responds:

Thanks for the 7!

Not QUITE dubstep, but nonetheless, wonderful :D

It was hard to find 'errors', per say, thus I don't really have much to say. Ummm, after whatever improvements people suggest, you should repost this in the general techno category, since only about 2/5 of the song is actually dubstep wob basses. But overall, it's not bad at all. Not my style, but I still like it. :D kudos!

4/5
9/10

Solkrieg responds:

It's dubstep, I promise ;). I try to model my stuff like Skrillex's stuff. I love that guys work. As for remodeling it, that's a no-go. I have had people tell me to do that before, but then I wouldn't get any experience in the dubstep genera.

This Honestly isn't that bad :)

Yes, it needs work. Sounds like you need some more tedious work with your compressor (I know it's horribly time consuming. it's a necessary evil). Not that it's hard to tell what the melody is, but maybe use a different style of a lead, I'm assuming it's that wonderful high feeling bell tone thing. Right now, I'm at 2:12, and I'm liking what I've heard. Ummm, 6 minutes and 14 seconds? You should try to make a more fluent song. I don't exactly what I want to say. I know what I mean, but I don't know how to say it. Great song overall! Listen to it over and over and write down what you feel, and go back into FL Studio or Ableton or whatever you use, and make those changes, and repost it. I'm going to favorite you just so I can hear the progress. I'm super excited for what this will become. Keep makin music bro!

btw, maybe check out a couple of my songs :D

ochrence responds:

When you say "fluent", are you saying that the song is too long, or that it's too disjointed?
I have grown to hate that lead, because it behaves the way I want it to only when it's not as important that it does. I know that I'll definitely change some stuff up with stand the compresser. Something that especially bothers me is that the rather detuned lead, the one that continues alone until the end, is too loud in the second and third choruses. That will also be fixed.
Thank you for your kind review!
-Ochrence

And I will check out your music.

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!

AHH! THIS IS UNDESCRIBEBALE!!!!!!!!!!!

yes, it has it's flaws, but it's only a demo, and so for a demo, this is amazing!!!!!
im really looking forward to a full song bro.

good job :D

,Sgt. Oreo

ExpendableMusic responds:

thanks

Sie sind schrecklich an, Musik zu machen.

Das ist schrecklich, und ich kann leicht sehen, warum dieses Lied zuletzt in der "Trance"-Sektion ist.

A-Ron-and-JKRohling responds:

so und lernen sie noch an so richtig zu sprechen und motzen dann nochmal

oh und es ist letzes weil ich eben noch nich so ouber berühmt bin und das mein 4 tes lied ist

aber danke für die Bewertung

FIVE xD

once again, great remix bro :D

ZachPayne responds:

;D It's because of your sick tune!

ehhh, has its moments.

for one, TURN UP THE VOLUME!!!! xDxDxD

this is sick hardstyle, fear not! its not loud enough! shoot for a bit more complexity, completely dramatacize transitions. like, take the cutoff all the way down slowly as it comes to a kick point, then bring it back up in like 2 beats really fast and it makes for a sick transition. besides that kind of stuff, this is a sick song. of course, true hardstyle is in 6/8 (yeshhh!) great job bro!

instafav, add water!

FrameWork responds:

Yeh, looking back this is not brilliant! It was my first attempt so you know. Yeh, i need to work on my mastering, 'cause some bits are too loud, for instance, when the drum roll and stab fx are together, and so others bits are left too quiet! I'll try what you said! thanks for the review, glad you liked it!

-Framework-

wtf was this supposed to be?

sorry guy. I don't really hear what this might supposed to be or, idk. It's wierd. Give it a second workout, maybe somethin will pop out.

OneRealMusician responds:

you dont know what this is? yuou're retded/

Pretty up there! :D

The only reason I dare leave off that last star is because the introduction is very short, and since you have vocals that sound amazing btw, you should leech every bit of emotion from them. Maybe add a harmony or an extra line of verse, etc. Have the lead part be a little less suddle also. Overall, this is an amazing song! I definitely feel like I'm listening to some real song I found on like the "Top Techno 2011" video or somethin xD great job!
Oh yea, it's ridiculously short to have such amazing loops, so if you ever open this can back up, I'd shoot for some length.

Sgt. Oreo - APPROVE OVERWHELMINGLY

btw, check out my song Dancex just a few places under this

ioneofmany responds:

Thanks Sergeant Oreo for the review and support. I'll take your suggestions into consideration if this is reopened. :)

--Chris

Pretty awesome!

Idk what Fall Lights are, but this is pretty great on itself. I don't have much time to write a full review, but the only thing that kept me from giving it a 5/5 is its lack of complexity.....don't misunderstand me, please. The melody is complex, but the use of VSTi effects is almost absent. And it helps sometimes mask some choppy leads. But I love this regardless. Keep it up!

IceMasterDlux responds:

Thanks man! Fall Lights is because I make a song for each season, and this is the Fall one. You should check out Winter, Spring and Summer Lights too! But thanks a lot for the great review, I appreciate it a lot! God bless man!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

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